Friday, January 2, 2009

choti si poem !! (by Anni)

This POEM :-) i haven't written this ! 1 of my sweetest frnd (Anni), this is 1 of her B.ful creation :-)

hope u wud like to read dis :-)
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**choti si poem**

jaane aisa kya hua yeh raahe tham si gayi hai

aab woh manzil kahi nigahoon mein nahi hai

dil karta hai baat karne ko tumse

kahi tumhe bhi hamari adat na padh jaye

is liye kiya karte hai hum wohi batein khudse

kisi aur se batien karna hame raas nahi aata

milte toh bahot hai hasane-rulane wale

lekin teri jaisi baton ka woh maza nahi aata

woh kehte hai k hum unki aadat na dale

khuda na kare woh aadat kabhi bhule

pyaar ka matlab jaana hai unse

khuda na kare woh pyaar kabhi chute :-) :-)

15 comments:

akshay said...

lovely poem @NNI :-) such a lovely creation :-)

Unknown said...

wow...ossam...its a precise story of evrybdy who fell in love...still its such a lofty n sublime creation....heaven!:)

Anonymous said...

wow sweetie... b'ful wrk >:D<

Anonymous said...

haha thank u soo much akshay

thanks ayushi [:)] i knw it is same story for all lol

shaanta [:)]thanks >:D<

dkyadav2007 said...

wow anni, lovely poem, really touched heart. I will like to read more. such a wonderful work it is, akshay please get us more of her work.

$@njeev said...

really liked it. very heart touching. good going.

Anonymous said...

lolz...arre yaar sab tareef kyon kar rahe hai? [:P] aur maine apni poem se sabke hearts touch kar diye? [:O] wahh jaadu [:P] :D thank u all...n thanks alot akki mere yaar muaaah

Anonymous said...

preet :-O apne pehchana nhi mujhe :-O kitty yaaar :-)

Anonymous said...

hehe mujhe lag raha tha k aap hi ho kitty dii par sure nahi thi [:P] :-* thank u dii

akshay said...

sab tareef isliye kar rahe hain kyuki sabko aapki pOeM achi lagi :-) :-) gud going re :-)

Unknown said...

Antarpreet.. u , very beautifully , hv put ur thots in the poem :-)

Anonymous said...

thank u aman ji :-)

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Anonymous said...

Its a really sweet poem :) gud work preet :)

Anonymous said...

thanks so much muskaan :-)