hope u wud like to read dis :-)
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**choti si poem**
jaane aisa kya hua yeh raahe tham si gayi hai
aab woh manzil kahi nigahoon mein nahi hai
dil karta hai baat karne ko tumse
kahi tumhe bhi hamari adat na padh jaye
is liye kiya karte hai hum wohi batein khudse
kisi aur se batien karna hame raas nahi aata
milte toh bahot hai hasane-rulane wale
lekin teri jaisi baton ka woh maza nahi aata
woh kehte hai k hum unki aadat na dale
khuda na kare woh aadat kabhi bhule
pyaar ka matlab jaana hai unse
khuda na kare woh pyaar kabhi chute :-) :-)
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**choti si poem**
jaane aisa kya hua yeh raahe tham si gayi hai
aab woh manzil kahi nigahoon mein nahi hai
dil karta hai baat karne ko tumse
kahi tumhe bhi hamari adat na padh jaye
is liye kiya karte hai hum wohi batein khudse
kisi aur se batien karna hame raas nahi aata
milte toh bahot hai hasane-rulane wale
lekin teri jaisi baton ka woh maza nahi aata
woh kehte hai k hum unki aadat na dale
khuda na kare woh aadat kabhi bhule
pyaar ka matlab jaana hai unse
khuda na kare woh pyaar kabhi chute :-) :-)
15 comments:
lovely poem @NNI :-) such a lovely creation :-)
wow...ossam...its a precise story of evrybdy who fell in love...still its such a lofty n sublime creation....heaven!:)
wow sweetie... b'ful wrk >:D<
haha thank u soo much akshay
thanks ayushi [:)] i knw it is same story for all lol
shaanta [:)]thanks >:D<
wow anni, lovely poem, really touched heart. I will like to read more. such a wonderful work it is, akshay please get us more of her work.
really liked it. very heart touching. good going.
lolz...arre yaar sab tareef kyon kar rahe hai? [:P] aur maine apni poem se sabke hearts touch kar diye? [:O] wahh jaadu [:P] :D thank u all...n thanks alot akki mere yaar muaaah
preet :-O apne pehchana nhi mujhe :-O kitty yaaar :-)
hehe mujhe lag raha tha k aap hi ho kitty dii par sure nahi thi [:P] :-* thank u dii
sab tareef isliye kar rahe hain kyuki sabko aapki pOeM achi lagi :-) :-) gud going re :-)
Antarpreet.. u , very beautifully , hv put ur thots in the poem :-)
thank u aman ji :-)
Its a really sweet poem :) gud work preet :)
thanks so much muskaan :-)
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